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Re: Fighter victories 1940 – A few French figures
Interesting stuff, although a lot of supposition on your part, which is not surprising given the lack of hard evidence to quantify scores. However - and please accept this as constructive criticism - your writing does not 'flow' and is difficult to follow. You also make additions and amendments which complicate matters even further. If I may suggest, proof reading is key, prior to submission.
Many thanks for taking the trouble to do this. I realise how much work is involved.
Kind rgds
Jonny
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