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Originally Posted by Bombphoon
What's wrong with that?
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Besides the inclusion of "forces" again the second sentence is pretty awkward with its four commas. I feel certain that Dr. Taylor could do a quick edit and improve this
I'm sure that the publisher has to insert a certain number of phrases and buzz words for their description of a book on the BoB. "Dunkirk" "Adolf Hitler" "radar" etc so that it shows up in different searches.