Could it be bettered? I was reading the sample pages on Red Kite's site today and noticed:
- "A distinctive and necessary seed-change" — I think they meant "sea-change"
- "carring 500 pound bombs" — "carrying"
- "Soesterburg" — "Soesterberg"
- "only one of the five man aboard survived" — "men"
- "masonary" — "masonry"
I know how hard it is to get everything right but if you're going to put up preview pages — excellent idea — it's as well not to have mistakes on them, I'd imagine.
(The information looks good though!)