Eagle Days: Life and Death for the Luftwaffe in the Battle of Britain

[Edward]

Originally Posted by Bombphoon

What's wrong with that?

Besides the inclusion of "forces" again the second sentence is pretty awkward with its four commas. I feel certain that Dr. Taylor could do a quick edit and improve this

I'm sure that the publisher has to insert a certain number of phrases and buzz words for their description of a book on the BoB. "Dunkirk" "Adolf Hitler" "radar" etc so that it shows up in different searches.